tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post3678532236455600907..comments2023-05-22T06:47:40.557-07:00Comments on Mercutio's Revenge.: AtlasMisfit.http://www.blogger.com/profile/11352778858740605627noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post-15705385203502863942012-12-12T21:24:20.888-08:002012-12-12T21:24:20.888-08:00..achieving for change/s in inner-self to become, .....achieving for change/s in inner-self to become, for once, an old-new being for someone... an exploration for innovation/s... great write... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post-7234949942459416012012-12-12T10:25:04.065-08:002012-12-12T10:25:04.065-08:00Excellent - do so love "Hurled by your hips.....Excellent - do so love "Hurled by your hips..."<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post-67294753391413683972012-12-10T13:59:11.819-08:002012-12-10T13:59:11.819-08:00This amazing poem could make anyone thurst for mor...This amazing poem could make anyone thurst for more.....a stunning write indeed!!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post-22905053552699703432012-12-10T08:46:46.923-08:002012-12-10T08:46:46.923-08:00Creative ... I enjoyed it.Creative ... I enjoyed it.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post-40561551725747910322012-12-10T02:09:34.547-08:002012-12-10T02:09:34.547-08:00I appreciated how you worked the compass rose into...I appreciated how you worked the compass rose into your poem...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post-180177017330483512012-12-09T23:17:12.947-08:002012-12-09T23:17:12.947-08:00Good interpretation of the prompt.Good interpretation of the prompt.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post-86376271954770094492012-12-09T16:32:44.567-08:002012-12-09T16:32:44.567-08:00"I thirst for you.
With the hue of your skin
..."I thirst for you.<br />With the hue of your skin<br />as my motivation,<br />I will follow your compass's rose"<br /><br />Gorgeous writing!!! Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4341782581451864879.post-59863149151793171752012-12-09T16:20:56.328-08:002012-12-09T16:20:56.328-08:00Hurled by your hips
into the deepest seas of longi...Hurled by your hips<br />into the deepest seas of longing,<br />I thirst for you....and following the compass rose to the fountain of youth...ha...nice...and some wonderful innuendo in that...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com