Thursday, February 16, 2012

Twelve months ago today.

Twelve months ago today,
The night wind hid
A silent song,
An outburst spoken
Without a voice.
The world stood still
In two connected hearts
On an asphalt road
In the slow-breathing dark
As the moon shone down
We blew the spark
And watched the world ignite.
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5 comments:

  1. Brian MillerFebruary 21, 2012 at 2:48 PM

    nice...makes me think of falling in love...cause that will certainly go off like a bomb...smiles...

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  2. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerFebruary 21, 2012 at 6:54 PM

    This does feel like the immediacy of the spark of love--lovely piece--lovely word choice!

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2012 at 2:50 PM

    Had to check off "provoking" because I want to know the back-story. Nicely written.

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  4. SheilaFebruary 22, 2012 at 6:31 PM

    intense and engaging - thanks!

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  5. BiancaFebruary 23, 2012 at 4:32 AM

    Lovely, I love the last two lines! Thanks for sharing :)

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