This is the story of my life. The story of a transient. Words are powerful. They can start a movement, or a revolution. These are my words.
This is nice. I like how drilled down it is, taking a small segment from a larger moment. Good poetry.
hehe...yeah, just one look and the world turns upside down...i know, i like...
oh, to get drunk at the sight of someone - how exciting. love the liquor-sweet eyes image and the last line that follows it is perfect. great write - I bet she liked it ;)
Liqour sweet eyes - words to get high by -sweet
This is nice. I like how drilled down it is, taking a small segment from a larger moment. Good poetry.
ReplyDeletehehe...yeah, just one look and the world turns upside down...i know, i like...
ReplyDeleteoh, to get drunk at the sight of someone - how exciting. love the liquor-sweet eyes image and the last line that follows it is perfect. great write - I bet she liked it ;)
ReplyDeleteLiqour sweet eyes - words to get high by -sweet
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