This is the story of my life. The story of a transient. Words are powerful. They can start a movement, or a revolution. These are my words.
Intriguing take on the prompt image!
nice....a vagabond heart i understand...a place to lay your head or plant...felt...
love this...a gypsy...the last line "a pillow to become my potting soil" great one!!
Different perspective...nice write!
I'm liking how I feel the photo prompt resonating behind your poem, like an afterimage caught when I close my eyes.
the last three lines are a brilliant way to end
Killer opening line...nice...
Beautiful!
Intriguing take on the prompt image!
ReplyDeletenice....a vagabond heart i understand...a place to lay your head or plant...felt...
ReplyDeletelove this...a gypsy...the last line "a pillow to become my potting soil" great one!!
ReplyDeleteDifferent perspective...nice write!
ReplyDeleteI'm liking how I feel the photo prompt resonating behind your poem, like an afterimage caught when I close my eyes.
ReplyDeletethe last three lines are a brilliant way to end
ReplyDeleteKiller opening line...nice...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
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