They say there is a distance between
Tallahassee and south Alabama.
They measure it in miles,
and post their fancied gulf
on bright green signs
along the interstate.
They say there is a great distance
between you and me,
but I do not believe them,
because I feel you dancing
in the honeysuckle-wind,
and hear your whispers
cut through the salty air.
They say that love is blind,
but really, love is the only thing
that can make you see:
for without our connected heartbeats
I would never see your apparition
gliding between the yellow pines
to comfort me.
They say that there is a distance between
Tallahassee and south Alabama,
but I do not believe them
because I feel you here with me.
this is so lyrical....its lovely and i would love to hear it sung with an acoustic guitar...i feel you dancing in the honeysuckle wind...love that...sing this, for real...
ReplyDeleteThis is most excellent, I feel every syllable! Very good job!!
ReplyDelete"They say that love is blind,
ReplyDeletebut really, love is the only thing
that can make you see"
Now, that's wisdom! Great poem, Mosk
very nice
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]